• UNIT 5 STUDY SKILLS AND WRITING

    Key Unit Competence: 

    To use language learnt in the context of study skills and writing.

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    1. Do you think experienced teachers can have difficulties giving 
    instructions in classroom? Justify your answer. 
    2. What should students do when they have not understood an 
    instruction in class?
    3. How can one make notes for revision?

    4. Outline at least 4 study skills you know.

    5.1 Instructions for working in class.

    v

    d

    • Text: Good instruction-giving in the second-language classroom

    Imagine you are attending a seminar. The facilitator gives instructions, and you 
    have a vague notion of what you are supposed to do, but you do not want to ask 
    the facilitator to clarify because you are sure you are the only one who has not 
    understood. After the facilitator tells you to start working, you turn to the person 
    next to you and ask, “What are we supposed to do?” That person says, “I’m not 
    sure. I thought you would know.” Soon you realize that almost everyone in the 
    room is confused, while the facilitator is standing behind the lectern wondering 
    why no one has started engaging in the activity she just explained. 

    Most of us can recall an experience where the facilitator delivered instructions, 
    but we were unclear about what we were expected to do. And, as student 
    teachers, most of you may have had experiences of giving instructions that 
    were misunderstood or incomprehensible to your learners. While occasional 
    foibles in giving instructions are understandable, mastering instruction-giving 
    is a fundamental aspect of good classroom teaching practice. Instructions and 
    their delivery can be the determining factors as to whether a lesson succeeds or 
    fails. Learners see the ability to explain things well as one of the most important 

    qualities of a good teacher.

    Instruction-giving has a direct effect on learning; a lesson or activity becomes 
    chaotic and fails when students do not understand what they are supposed 
    to do. Nonetheless, good instruction-giving is a challenge for both native 
    and non-native language teachers, as well as for both seasoned and novice 
    teachers. However, instruction-giving is a skill that is sometimes neglected for 
    pre-service and in-service teachers in teacher-training programs. New teachers 
    might assume that it is a skill that will be naturally mastered; more experienced 
    teachers might assume that it is a skill they have already mastered. For all 
    teachers, however, instruction-giving is an area that deserves attention and 
    practice, as it has a major impact on how well students are able to carry out 
    activities and, as a result, how well they learn.

    After year 3, you may be hired to teach in upper primary and thus be obliged 
    to teach in English. In this case, Total Physical Response (TPR) can help you. 
    TPR is a method of language teaching developed by James Asher where the 
    teacher gives a command and the students perform the action. In short, TPR is 
    based on the coordination of language and physical movement. To apply it, you 
    can first give students a hand-out with a list of common instructional commands 
    used throughout the course, such as take out a pen or pencil, Turn to page…, 
    take out a pen or pencil, take out a piece of paper, write your name on the paper, 
    open your books, close your books, put your books away, stand up, sit down, 
    find a partner, put your desks face-to-face, repeat after me, raise your hand, 
    work in groups, choose a group leader, you have 5 minutes, get ready to report 
    in English etc.
    After demonstrating the actions and going over the list with students, you should 
    give commands and have the students perform them. Starting the course with 
    TPR for common instructions helps students understand typical classroom 
    language, which has a positive impact on classroom management. Remember, 
    good instruction-giving begins in the preparation stage. Although teachers 
    may feel they can easily improvise, instructions are often not as clear to their 
    students as they are to themselves. A good way to make sure your instructions 
    for an activity are clear and concise is to write them out as you develop your 
    lesson plan. 
    (Adapted from Good Instruction-Giving in the Second-Language Classroom by JIMALEE 
    Sowell- ‎2017)
    • Comprehension questions
    1. What do you understand by “you have a vague notion of what you are 
    supposed to do”?
    2. Referring to paragraph one, explain why some students don’t ask when 
    they have not understood instructions. 
    3. How do you think students would judge a teacher whose instructions are 
    not easily understandable?
    4. Discuss effects of instruction-giving on a lesson or activity.
    5. Can good instruction-giving be a challenge to native language teachers? 
    Explain.
    6. What do you understand by “Total Physical Response”?
    7. List eighteen common instructional commands mentioned in the fourth 

    paragraph. 

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    Vocabulary, paragraph and composition writing.
    I. Vocabulary
    Use a dictionary and thesaurus to look up the missing meanings of the 
    words/phrases in the table below. Copy the table into your book and fill in 

    the blank spaces.

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    II. Paragraph writing.

    In one paragraph, detail characteristics of a good classroom instruction.

    III. Composition writing.

    Suppose you are going to teach English in primary one. Step by step 

    explain how you would give instructions to primary one learners. 

    5.2 Reading extracts from literature.

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    The extract tells us about Pip, an orphan who is about seven years old. While 
    visiting the graves of his parents and siblings, the boy encounters an escaped 
    convict in the village churchyard.
    ‘Hold your noise!’ cried a terrible voice, as a man started up from among the 
    graves at the side of the church porch. ‘Keep still, you little devil, or I’ll cut your 
    throat!’ A fearful man, all in coarse grey, with a great iron on his leg. A man with 
    no hat, and with broken shoes, and with an old rag tied round his head. A man 
    who had been soaked in water, and smothered in mud, and lamed by stones, 
    and cut by flints, and stung by nettles, and torn by briars; who limped, and 
    shivered, and glared, and growled; and whose teeth chattered in his head as he 

    seized me by the chin.

    O! Don’t cut my throat, sir,’ I pleaded in terror. ‘Pray don’t do it, sir.’ 
    ‘Tell us your name!’ said the man. ‘Quick!’ 
    ‘Pip, sir.’
    ‘Once more,’ said the man, staring at me. ‘Give it mouth!’ 
    ‘Pip. Pip, sir.’ 
    ‘Show us where you live,’ said the man. ‘Point out the place!’ 
    I pointed to where our village lay, on the flat in-shore among the alder-trees and 
    pollards, a mile or more from the church.
    The man, after looking at me for a moment, turned me upside down, and emptied 
    my pockets. There was nothing in them but a piece of bread. When the church 
    came to itself, — for he was so sudden and strong that he made it go head 
    over heels before me, and I saw the steeple under my feet, — when the church 
    came to itself, I say, I was seated on a high tombstone, trembling while he ate 
    the bread ravenously. 
    ‘You young dog,’ said the man, licking his lips, ‘what fat cheeks you ha’ got.’ 
    I believe they were fat, though I was at that time undersized for my years, and 
    not strong.
    ‘Darn Me if I couldn’t eat em,’ said the man, with a threatening shake of his head, 
    ‘and if I hadn’t half a mind to ’t!’
    I earnestly expressed my hope that he wouldn’t, and held tighter to the tombstone 
    on which he had put me; partly, to keep myself upon it; partly, to keep myself 
    from crying. 
    ‘Now look here!’ said the man. ‘Where’s your mother?’ 
    ‘There, sir!’ said I. 
    He started, made a short run, and stopped and looked over his shoulder. 
    ‘There, sir!’ I timidly explained. ‘Also Georgiana. That’s my mother.’ 
    ‘Oh!’ said he, coming back. ‘And is that your father along your mother?’ 
    ‘Yes, sir,’ said I; ‘him too; late of this parish.’
    ‘Ha!’ he muttered then, considering. ‘Who d’ye live with, - supposin’ you’re kindly 
    let to live, which I han’t made up my mind about?’ 
    ‘My sister, sir, — Mrs Joe Gargery, — wife of Joe Gargery, the blacksmith, sir.’ 

    ‘Blacksmith, eh?’ said he. And looked down at his leg.

    After darkly looking at his leg and me several times, he came closer to my 
    tombstone, took me by both arms, and tilted me back as far as he could hold 
    me; so that his eyes looked most powerfully down into mine, and mine looked 
    most helplessly up into his. 
    ‘Now lookee here,’ he said, ‘the question being whether you’re to be let to live. 
    You know what a file is?’ 
    ‘Yes, sir.’ 
    ‘And you know what wittles is?’ 
    ‘Yes, sir.’
    After each question he tilted me over a little more, so as to give me a greater 
    sense of helplessness and danger. 
    ‘You get me a file.’ He tilted me again. ‘And you get me wittles.’ He tilted me 
    again. 
    ‘You bring ‘em both to me.’ He tilted me again. ‘Or I’ll have your heart and liver 
    out.’
    He tilted me again. 
    I was dreadfully frightened, and so giddy that I clung to him with both hands, and 
    said, ‘If you would kindly please to let me keep upright, sir, perhaps I shouldn’t 
    be sick, and perhaps I could attend more.’ 
    He gave me a most tremendous dip and roll, so that the church jumped over its 
    own weathercock. Then, he held me by the arms, in an upright position on the 
    top of the stone, and went on in these fearful terms:
    ‘You bring me, to-morrow morning early, that file and them whittles. You bring 
    the lot to me, at that old Battery over yonder. You do it, and you never dare to 
    say a word or dare to make a sign concerning your having seen such a person 
    as me, or any person sumever, and you shall be let to live. You fail, or you go 
    from my words in any partickler, no matter how small it is, and your heart and 
    your liver shall be tore out, roasted, and ate. Now, I ain’t alone, as you may think 
    I am. There’s a young man hid with me, in comparison with which young man I 
    am an Angel. 
    That young man hears the words I speak. That young man has a secret way 
    peculiar to himself, of getting at a boy, and at his heart, and at his liver. It is in 
    vain for a boy to attempt to hide himself from that young man. A boy may lock 
    his door, may be warm in bed, may tuck himself up, may draw the clothes over 
    his head, may think himself comfortable and safe, but that young man will softly 

    creep and creep his way to him and tear him open. I am keeping that young man

    from harming you at the present moment, with great difficulty. I find it very hard 
    to hold that young man off of your inside. Now, what do you say?’ 
    I said that I would get him the file, and I would get him those broken bits of food 
    I could, and I would come to him at the Battery, early in the morning. 
    ‘Say Lord strike you dead if you don’t!’ said the man. 
    I said so, and he took me down. 
    (Adapted from Charles Dickens’ (1861). Great Expectations. London: Chapman and Hall.)
    Comprehension questions 
    1. Describe the man who is talked about in this extract.
    2. Describe the character of the narrator in this extract. 
    3. Where does the conversation between Pip and the escapee take place? 
    4. How does the escapee end up snatching Pip’s loaf of bread? 
    5. The man told Pip that he was with a young man who was more awesome 

    than him. Do you think he was telling the truth? Explain

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    Vocabulary, paragraph and composition writing.

    I. Vocabulary
    In full sentences, explain the following words as used in the above passage. 
    a. ... soaked... 
    b. ...smothered... 
    c. ...rag... 
    d. ...briar.../ (brier) 
    e. ...steeple... 
    f. ...tombstone... 
    g. ... tilted... 
    h. ...clung... 
    i. ...tremendous... 
    j. ...peculiar... 
    II. Paragraph writing 
    In two paragraphs, explain what Pip’s reaction towards the escapee in the 
    above extract reveal about his character.

    III. Composition writing.

    a. Write a 6 paragraph composition, describing the character of the 

    escapee in this extract. 

    b. Pip almost got killed as he visited the graveyard where his parents and 

    relatives are buried. Write a short composition explaining whether visiting 

    our ancestor’s graveyard is or it is not a worthwhile practice.

    c. Step by step, explain how you would have reacted if you were in Pip’s 

    situation.

    5.3 Describing different study skills

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     Text: Basic study skills

    Acquiring good study habits can make you a more effective learner in school 
    and at work. The key to becoming an effective student is learning how to study 
    smarter, not harder. This becomes more and more important as you advance in 
    your education. An hour or two of studying a day is usually sufficient to make it 
    through in high school with satisfactory grades, but you can’t make it if you don’t 
    know how to study smarter. Basic study skills include: elaborative interrogation, 
    self-Explanation, practice testing, distributed practice and Interleaved Practice. 
    Elaborative interrogation is a great way to learn. In elaborative interrogation 
    you ask yourself questions. Little kids know this intuitively, as they run around 
    asking “Why, why, why?” Asking yourself questions like “why is this fact true?” 
    aids learning. The main reason asking why questions seems to work is that it 
    encourages you to integrate the new fact with things you already know. Doing 

    so improves your memory for the new fact by giving you more eagerness to find

    The idea behind self-explanation as a reading strategy is to pause from reading 
    your textbook periodically and explain to yourself what it means to you. You can 
    do this after a section of text, or when studying an example problem. When 
    trying to self-explain, you may find that you need to look back over parts of the 
    text to fully understand what’s being said. Self-explanation encourages you to 
    make inferences based on what you are reading. You don’t just summarize the 
    text, but say a little more than what was in it. As you try to explain, you also 
    identify problems and so revise your explanation. These serve to enrich and 
    repair your understanding.
    Actively testing your memory improves learning far more than passively reviewing 
    material. Tests are not just for evaluation. Testing improves learning by exercising 
    memory retrieval. When you answer a test question, you have to actively search 
    your long-term memory. Doing so creates more and better pathways to the 
    answer. This makes the answer easier to find the next time around. Scientists 
    sometimes call it, “retrieval practice.” Practice testing is easy to do. You can do 
    it by answering questions from your textbook or past papers. 
    Distributed practice helps you do better since it allows you to space your 
    studying out over the time you have. Do a little at a time over several study 
    sessions. If you have a test coming up tomorrow, you should not try to cram 
    everything in one session. Successful students typically space their work out 
    over shorter periods of time and rarely try to cram all of their studying into just 
    one night. One reason distributed practice aids learning is that you have to restart your memory for the topic during each study session. This technique is 
    best when combined with practice testing. 
    The idea behind interleaved practice is that you are better off mixing some area 
    problems with some perimeter problems when you study. When studying math, 
    for instance, you need to learn a few different kinds of formulas. You may learn 
    one equation to compute the area of a circle and learn another to figure out the 
    perimeter. Interleaving is a process where students mix, or interleave multiple 
    subjects or topics to improve learning. 
    In a nutshell, the above mentioned five study skills all work quite well. There are 
    many other study skills but these five ones are more strongly recommended 
    than others. These techniques will not be a panacea for improving achievement 
    for all students, and perhaps obviously, they will benefit only students who are 
    motivated and capable of using them. Nevertheless, when used properly, they 
    may produce meaningful gains in performance in the classroom, on achievement 
    tests, and on many other tasks encountered across the life span. 

    Adapted from Five Study Skills to Accelerate Your Learning by WINSTON SIECK

    • Comprehension questions

    1. What is the key to becoming an effective student as described in the first 
    paragraph?
    2. What do you understand by “to study smarter, not harder”?
    3. Outline the five study skills as mentioned in the passage.
    4. To what extent is elaborative interrogation as a study skill is important?
    5. Appreciate the role of self-explanation in studying.
    6. If you have a test coming up tomorrow, should you try to cram everything 

    in one session? Justify your answer

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    Vocabulary and composition writing.
    I. Vocabulary
    Explain the following words as used in the above passage. 
    a. Satisfactory
    b. Eagerness
    c. Inferences
    d. Repair
    e. Retrieval
    f. Long-term memory
    g. Pathways
    h. Cram
    i. Panacea
    j. Encountered
    II. Composition writing
    Write a short composition explaining how you use distributed practice as 
    a study skill. 

    5.4 Writing compositions
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    • Text: Aspects of a Composition
    When we write, our objective is to communicate with the reader. Your 
    composition should therefore convey a clear message to the readers. Any piece 
    of composition is made of three main parts: 
    a. Introduction 
    An introduction is always intended to draw the reader’s attention to the whole 
    composition. It could begin with a general statement or question, sometimes 
    called the thesis statement or thesis question. This should be followed by a 
    summarised presentation of the main point with which to develop the body of 
    the composition. The introduction should also set the stage for the writer to 
    guide the reader into the gist of the topic. An introduction should be concluded 
    with a transition sentence that leads the reader into the body of the composition.
    b. Body (Argument) 
    The body of a written piece is where one elaborates, defends, and expands 
    the main points stated in the introduction. The body should support the main 
    argument with supporting evidence or examples to illustrate the point. 
    The body of the composition is always made of different paragraphs based on the 
    number of points making the topic. Each point takes an independent paragraph. 
    As one makes or argues a case, it is better to ensure that the strongest point is 
    presented as early as possible. 
    c. Conclusion 
    A conclusion is normally a single and concise paragraph in which a final appeal 
    to the reader is made. It is a finishing, all-encompassing statement that wraps 
    up the whole presentation in a powerful statement. The writer is expected to 
    express his or her final opinion on the matter discussed. The purpose of the 
    conclusion is to leave the reader with an idea or thought that captures the 
    essence of the body while provoking further reflection and consideration.
    • Comprehension questions
    1. What are the characteristics of a good composition?
    2. Outline the parts of a composition.
    3. How should one start his/her composition?
    4. In which part should the writer support his/her main argument with 
    supporting evidence or examples?

    5. How should one conclude his/her composition?

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    Writing a composition.
    I. Write a 300 word composition explaining how a student should 
    prepare his/her exam. 
    II. Suppose that you are going to teach in a second language and you 
    expect learners not to be able to decode instructions. Write a 250 
    word composition detailing how you would help them.
    III. Write a 300 word composition explaining whether failing an exam 

    means that a student is not intelligent.

    5.5. Making notes

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    Note making is not just about writing down everything you hear or read. It is a 
    process of reviewing, connecting and synthesising ideas from your lessons or 
    readings. In secondary schools, students are expected to become proficient
    note-takers, and those notes are essential study tools that they use to review 
    material for quizzes and tests. Note-taking should augment student learning and 
    help students recall difficult concepts more easily and remember what teachers 
    teach. Good note-taking strategies that will help you retain what you learn and 
    study smarter include: Recording meaningful facts, grouping ideas, thinking 
    quality over quantity, following along in the book if appropriate, indicating date 
    and title notes, highlighting the clues and saying it another way.

    Recording meaningful facts is very useful while taking notes. The goal of notetaking should be to summarize the most important parts of what a teacher 
    shares during a lesson: dates, names, places, formulas or anything else that is 
    emphasized. It’s good to write lots of notes, but you should focus on recording 
    points that seem important, recurring themes or other details that are critical to 
    their overall understanding.

    Grouping ideas is equally a good strategy since lots of raw notes may not make 
    studying easier for a student. It’s a good idea to leave space on the left- or righthand side of the notebook for condensing and recapping concepts. During 

    class or while reading a book, you can write down any main ideas on the side of 
    notes, or at a minimum, subtitles of what was discussed or read

    Apart from grouping ideas, another strategy you need to think of is thinking 
    quality over quantity. New secondary school students tend to think good notetaking means recording everything the teacher says. It’s a common challenge
    for students: focusing so intently on taking notes that they forget to listen and 
    process information enough to be thoughtful about what they record in their 
    notebooks. While taking notes you should concentrate on what the teacher 
    wants the class to know. That may very well mean students’ pencils should not 
    be moving during the entire class period, and that’s perfectly fine.

    Following along in the book if appropriate is another advantageous strategy. 
    When the teacher focuses on a particular chapter or topic, it can be helpful 
    later on to have page numbers to refer to for clarification or more information. 
    Secondary school students should ask at the beginning of the period if the 
    teacher is referencing textbook material.

    The strategy of indicating date and title notes is a minor thing but it can make a 
    huge difference: labelling notes will prove helpful when it comes time to study 
    for a test. Teens should always put the date, class topic(s) discussed at the top 
    of their notes. 

    In addition to the above mentioned strategies, highlighting the clues is a strategy 
    that can help you retain the most important information. Teachers usually point 
    out information that students need to know and it is a smart idea to call out 
    these cues in notes. Secondary school students should listen for phrases like 
    the most important part, for example, in summary, as a review and the only 
    exception to this is. These should trigger careful note-taking and you should 
    notate these important points with an asterisk or other symbol.
    The last strategy but not the least is saying it another way. One of the most 
    important parts of note-taking is not the note-taking itself is the reflection 
    process. Secondary school students should write down complex points in their 
    own words so they are easier to understand later. This helps information click 
    and reinforces long-term retention.
    In conclusion, students should know that taking notes is not a natural skill. It 
    must be taught and practiced. Organized students tend to take cleaner notes, of 
    course, but note-taking is meant to solidify knowledge and make studying easier 
    and more effective, and that doesn’t come easily to many students. Secondary 
    school students should know note taking strategies in order for their revision to 
    be successful. 
    (Adapted from Seven note-taking strategies for high school students by Huntington 
    Learning Centre)

    • Comprehension questions

    1. What do you understand by “note making”?
    2. Discuss the role of taking notes. 
    3. State seven note-taking strategies as mentioned in the above passage. 
    4. What should a student focus on while taking notes?
    5. Why is it import to group ideas while taking notes?
    6. What do you understand by “thinking quality over quantity”?
    7. How can a student identify the clues to highlight?
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    vocabulary, note taking and paragraph writing.
    I. Vocabulary
    Explain the following words as used in the text above.
    a. Synthesising
    b. Augment
    c. Raw notes
    d. Recapping
    e. Intently
    f. Thoughtful

    g. Trigger

    II. Note taking 
    Visit the school library and read a section of a book of your choice. Take 
    notes on the important information and be ready to present it in class. 
    III. Paragraph writing 
    Write a paragraph explaining why students need to be guided on how to 
    take notes.

    5.6 Writing a summary

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    • Text: How to Write a Summary

    A summary is a brief statement or account that presents the essential information 
    or main idea of a reading or lecture. Proficient students understand that 
    summarizing, identifying what is most important and restating the text (or other 
    media) in your own words, is an important tool for success. 

    If you really understand a subject or a chapter, you will be able to summarize it. 
    If you cannot summarize what you read, even if you have memorized all the facts 
    about it, you can be absolutely sure that you have not learned it. If you truly learn 
    the subject, you will still be able to summarize it months or years from now.

    Talented students may monitor their understanding of a text by summarizing 
    as they read. They understand that if they can write a one- or two-sentence 
    summary of each paragraph after reading it, then that is a good sign that they 
    have correctly understood it. If they cannot summarize the main idea of the 
    paragraph, they know that comprehension has broken down and they need to 
    use fix-up strategies to repair understanding. Below are tips on how to write a 
    summary:
    - Write main ideas in your own words.
    - Shape these ideas into sentences that express the purpose and point of 
    view of the writer or speaker.
    - Remember that a summary is written in paragraph form.
    - A summary begins with an introductory sentence that states the text’s title, 
    author and main point of the text.
    - A summary is written in your own words.
    - A summary contains only the ideas of the original text. Do not insert any 
    of your own opinions, interpretations, deductions or comments into a 
    summary.
    - Write a last sentence that wraps up your summary; often a simple 
    rephrasing of the main point.
    - The final material should be not more than one third of its original length. 
    • Comprehension questions:
    1. In your own word define the term “summary”.
    2. Does memorising a section of a book prove that you understand it? 
    Explain.
    3. How should one introduce a summary?
    4. How should one conclude a summary?

    5. Appreciate the contribution of a summary to studying.

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    Vocabulary and summary writing. 
    I. Vocabulary
    Explain the following words as used in the above text.
    a. Proficient
    b. Monitor
    c. Fix-up strategies
    d. Deductions
    e. Wraps up
    II. Summary writing.
    Go back to unit 1 and read the text on Components of communication. 
    Summarise it in not more than 80 words.

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    • Text1: A business letter

    A business letter, as the name suggests, is a letter which has a formal tone 
    and is used for business purposes. Apart from this, business letters are also 
    written for conveying messages to people whom we do not know personally. 
    This makes the business letter different from the usual casual or informal letter.
    While writing a business letter, a person has to follow certain rules. One of the 
    most important rules is that it should be short and concise. Businessmen do not 
    have the time to read long letters and hence, the letter should not be more than 
    a page. Apart from this, you have to follow a unique format for business letters, 
    which differs to a large extent from informal letters.
    A business letter is a formal letter like other formal letters. It is a good idea to 
    gather some crucial information on the things that you have to keep in mind while 
    writing a business letter. Below are some important tips for a good business 

    letter

    - Margin: To start with, leave a margin from all the four sides of the paper.
    - Sender’s address and date: According to the rules, it is important to begin 
    the letter with the address and other contact details of the sender. However, 
    this can be avoided, if the letter is typed on the letterhead. Followed by 
    this, one has to mention the date on which the letter is written.
    - Recipient’s name and address: After you have written the date, you have 
    to mention the recipient’s name and full address. This should come some 
    lines after the date
    - Salutation: Once you are done with the address of the recipient, you have 
    to begin the letter with a salutation. The salutation should have a greeting 
    word or phrase followed by a personal title - Mr./Ms. – and sometimes the 
    full name of the person. Some of the letter salutations that you can use for 
    business letters include Dear (full name), Dear Sir/Madam, etc. 
    - Subject: After the salutation comes the subject line where you have to 
    mention the purpose of the letter in short. In some letters it is called 
    Request.
    - Body: The body of the letter can have 2-3 paragraphs. In the introduction, 
    talk about the reason for writing the letter and in the following paragraphs, 
    you can give the necessary details. 
    - Complimentary closing: Once you finish writing the letter, you have to end 
    it with a complimentary closing. Some of the closings include Respectfully 
    Yours, Sincerely yours, Yours faithfully, etc. if you are using a computer, 
    leave four blank spaces after the complimentary closing and then, write 
    your full name. The blank space should be used to sign your name.
    - Enclosure: If you have enclosed some document with your letter, it is 
    important for you to mention it just below your name. Leave two spaces and 
    write ‘Enclosure’ or ‘Enclosures’ below it. If you have attached more than 
    one enclosure, do not forget to mention the correct number in brackets.
    - CC: If you are sending the same letter to more than one person write “cc” 
    below the enclosure and write the name of the other person to whom you 
    are sending the same letter. 
    Types of Formats
    Although the information given below can help you in understanding the 
    business letter format correctly, looking at a sample will make it very clear. Types 
    of formats include: Block Letter Format, Semi-block Format and Modified Block 
    Format. 
    a) Block Letter Format
    In this type, all the text in the letter is left-aligned. Indent is also not required if 
    you are using a block letter format for writing a letter. The paragraphs are spaced 
    either using double or triple paragraph spacing, but there is no indention for the 

    paragraphs.

    Address
    Telephone Number
    Email Address
    Date
    Recipient’s
    Address
    Dear Mr./Ms. 
    Subject/Re: (PURPOSE OF THE LETTER)
    In the first paragraph, you can introduce yourself, if the recipient does not 
    know you. After this, mention the purpose of the letter.
    In the second paragraph, give out the details i.e., the facts that support 
    the statement you made in the first paragraph. You can end the letter 
    with this paragraph or you can have another one, if the information 
    you want to convey does not fit in this paragraph. Complete the 
    letter by thanking the recipient for taking out time to read the letter.
    Respectfully Yours,
    (Your Signature)
    (Your Name)
    Enclosure(s) (mention the number)

    cc:

    b) Semi-block Format
    This type of format follows the same arrangement as the block format (i.e., left 
    alignment) except for paragraphs where indention is applied.
    c) Modified Block Format
    In this type also all the text is left-aligned with the exception of the sender’s 
    address, business date and closing signature, which are placed toward the 
    right hand side. In this format also, there is no indention of paragraphs.
    N.B: Apart from the above mentioned formats, there are other formats of formal 
    letters. For example, a letter in which the sender’s address is put in the top right 

    corner of the paper. 

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    • Comprehension question 

    1. What is a business letter?
    2. Give at least one reason why a business letter should be short and 
    concise.
    3. Is there any difference between business letters and other formal letters?
    4. Give two examples of letter closing terms. 
    5. Mention at least 3 types of business letter format. 
    • Text 2: Curriculum vitae (CV)
    A CV is an abbreviation of curriculum vitae. It is a document used to present 
    personal life details to prospective employers. In the case of a job application, 
    it should tell about professional history and skills, abilities and achievements. 

    Ultimately, it should highlight why you’re the best person for the job.

    What to include in a CV: 

    While the structure of a CV is flexible, there are particular sections that employers 

    expect to see on a CV. Here below are the sections that must be included in a 

    CV: 

    Name, professional title and contact details: The first part of a CV, positioned 
    at the top of the page, should contain the name, professional title and contact 
    details. The title of your CV should be ‘curriculum vitae’. When it comes to 
    contact details, email address and phone number(s) are essential. 

    Experience and employment history: Employment history section provides 
    opportunity to outline previous occupations, internships and work experience. 
    Experience starts with the most recent. When writing about experience, for 
    each position held, it is important to state the job title, employer, the period of 
    that employment and a one-line summary of the duties assigned, including key 
    responsibilities, skills and achievements. Bolster each point with active verbs 
    and figures to support each claim to show impact on the organisations served.
     

    Education and qualifications: Like experience section, the education background 
    should start with the highest qualification towards the lowest. The name of the 
    institutions and the period of study are required too.

    Hobbies and interests: Depending on the type of job applied for, one can boost 
    his or her CV by inserting hobbies and interests section at the end, focusing on 
    interests that make them stand out or are relevant to the job. 
    References: Referees are needed to confirm the information given in the CV. 
    • Comprehension questions
    1. Appreciate the importance of CV.
    2. List five particular sections that employers expect to see on a CV.
    3. Using an example, explain how hobbies and interests in the CV can 

    increase the chance of getting a job.

    Letter and CV writing.

    I. Letter writing.

    a. Suppose that you are head of Human Resource Department of a 
    large bank. Write a letter to the governor of the National bank 
    recommending a job applicant for a position. 
    b. Suppose that you have finished TTC studies. Write a letter to the 
    District Education Officer (DEO), requesting a teaching job in primary 
    school. 
    II. CV writing.
    Write a CV that will accompany the application letter mentioned above in 

    question b

    5.8. Language structure: Connectors of contrast, explaining 

    and listing

    Notes: As their name itself suggests sentence connectors are used to combine 
    sentences. They also express the relationship between ideas. We can add variety 
    and sophistication to our writing by using appropriate sentence connectors. 
    They can also be used to connect paragraphs to give them coherence.
    I. Connectors of contrast
    Connectors of contrast are sentence connectors that join two contrasting 
    ideas. They include: But, although, despite the fact that, however, nevertheless, 
    despite, in spite of, yet, etc. 
    Examples:
    1. His rope was thin but it was strong. 
    2. He is fat but he runs fast.
    3. Although the boy was injured, he didn’t give up.
    4. We went out in spite of the rain.
    5. In spite of having a headache, I enjoyed the film.
    6. Despite working hard, she failed the exam.
    7. She got good marks in spite of her teacher. (= She had a bad teacher.)
    8. Her advice seems strange, yet I believe she’s right
    9. He says that he is a socialist. However, he owns three houses and four 
    luxury cars.
    10. There was little chance of success. Nevertheless, we didn’t give up.
    Nevertheless is very formal. In a less formal style, we can use conjunctions 
    like but or yet. Nevertheless and however don’t combine two clauses. They 
    are used to emphasize the fact that the point expressed by the second clause 
    contrasts with the first. In writing, they are separated from the rest of the 
    sentence by a comma.
    II. Connectors of listing 
    Connectors of listing include:
    - firstly, secondly ...
    - to begin / start with ..., to conclude with
    - in the first place, in the second place
    - next , then , finally, last(ly)
    - to conclude ...
    - last but not least ...
    - to summarise , to sum up 
    III. Connectors of example
    Connectors of example include: 
    - for example (e.g.), for instance
    - that is (i.e.)
    - that is to say
    - ... such as ...
    - namely ...
    Exercise
    1. Some people believe in ghosts and supernatural phenomena…….others 
    are sceptical about all that. (however, in spite of, whereas)
    2. GDP in developing countries………. Rwanda will continue growing at a 
    high rate. (such as, for example, although)
    3. She didn’t get the job……….her brilliant qualifications. (despite, though, 
    yet)
    4. They brought lunch, ………..sandwiches and soda.( namely, in spite of, 
    even though)

    5. I’m not going to speak to her…………….she begs me pardon(but, 

    although, however)

    6. …………….the risks thousands of people climb the Everest every year.( 

    in spite of, even though, nevertheless)

    7. ……………….I went to the store, and………..I got gas. (then/first) 

    8. ……………..I learned so much, I didn’t manage to pass my exam. ( But/ 

    Even though) 

    9. You’ll be nauseous ……………you stop eating so many sweets. 

    (whereas/ unless)

    10. ………………we’re at the bus station by seven o’clock, we’ll miss our 

    bus. (Therefore/Unless)


    

    5.9. Spelling and pronunciation 

    A. Spelling

    Correct spelling mistakes in the following paragraph.
    Iffective revision is not something that can be rushed. So start well in advanse of 
    the exam date. This will lesseen the chance of having to do last minute craming 
    and spending the whole night in the library. It’s a good idea to have a rautine 
    with your revision where you aim to start and finish at roufly the same time each 

    day

    B. Phonetic transcription 

    Give phonetic transcriptions of the following words

    a. Synthesising

    b. Augment

    c. Raw notes

    d. Recapping

    e. Intently

    f. Thoughtful

    g. Trigger

    5.10.End unit Assessmen

    I. Write a letter to the Director General of REB asking him to address the 
    problem of book scarcity in your school. Use connectors of example 
    and other connectors in your composition.
    II. Choose the best alternative from the brackets to fill in the blank space. 
    1. ………………… (Even if/whereas) you saved a lot, you wouldn’t be 
    able to afford that house.
    2. He eats only healthy food………………. (because of/ whereas )his 
    sister gorges herself with junk food.
    3. You should learn more,……………….. (although/otherwise) you might 
    fail your exams.
    4. Martha wanted to work in England, …………… (therefore/despite) , 
    she studied English very hard.
    5. ………………….. (Otherwise/ Even) if your chances are small, you 
    should try to do it.
    6. ………………….. (Although/Unless) he was very tired, he worked 
    very hard.
    7. Slice this meat and ……………… (because of/ afterwards) you can 
    boil it for thirty minutes.
    8. I cooked dinner……………….(so that/then) my friends wouldn’t have 
    to eat out.
    9. This street is slippery …………….. (otherwise/because of) the snow.
    10. Something must be wrong; …………… (otherwise/unless ) Keza 
    would be at school.
    11. ……………….(In spite of /Although) he is very rich, he doesn’t help 
    his parents.
    12. ……………….( So that/ Even though) the weather was windy, we 
    went for a walk.
    13. She is always helpful and friendly to me, ………………… (although/
    therefore), I like her very much
    14. He must be very clever; ………………….. (whereas /otherwise) he 
    wouldn’t have passed such a hard exam.
    15. ……………..(Unless /Although) I have a bike, I don’t often ride it.
    16. I like horror films ……………..(despite/ whereas) my friend prefers 
    comedies.
    III. Write a short composition, narrating the difficulties you encountered 
    decoding instructions in any lesson. 
    IV. Write one paragraph, explaining the importance of note taking

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