• UNIT 3 : ELEGY AND EPITAPH

    Key Unit Competence: 

    Be able to identify and analyse elegies and epitaphs and explore their tone and atmosphere created in them.


    Introductory activity    

    Answer the questions below.

    1. Identify and explain the types of poems you know. 

    2. Choose two of the poem types you have mentioned above and describe their distinct characteristics.


    3.1 Elegy

    Activity 3.1 

    Answer the questions below.

    1. Explain the term elegy in poetry. 

    2. Identify the characteristics of an elegy.

    Note: Etymologically the term elegy derived from the Greek word elegus which means a song of bereavement sung along with a flute. In literature, an elegy is a poem of serious reflection, which typically mourns the loss of someone who has died or something that has been deteriorated. A notable example is the Elegy Written in a country Churchyard, by Thomas Gray (was completed in 1751 and first published in 1751. The poem is an elegy in name but not in form, it employs a style similar to that of contemporary poetry …) 


    Application activity 3.1 

    Read the poem below and then answer the questions that follow.

    The Widow’s Lament in Springtime 

    Sorrow is my own yard where the new grass flames as it has flamed  often before but not with the cold fire that closes round me this year. Thirty-five years I lived with my husband. The plum tree is white today with masses of flowers. Masses of flowers load the cherry branches and colour some bushes yellow and some red but the grief in my heart is stronger than they for though they were my joy formerly, today I notice them and turn away forgetting. Today my son told me that in the meadows, at the edge of the heavy woods in the distance, he saw trees of white flowers. I feel that I would like to go there and fall into those flowers and sink into the marsh near them.

                                                                                     William Carlos Williams sources

    Questions

    1. What of poem is it? Substantiate your answer. 

    2. Identify the point of view used in this poem 

    3.  What is the main theme of this poem? 

    4. Create another example of an elegy.

    3.2. Epitaph

    Activity3.2 

    Answer thequestions below.

    1. Observe the picture above and discuss what you think Epitaph is. 

    2. Identify the characteristics of Epitaph.

    Note: An epitaph is from Greek term epitaphios”which means “a funeral oration.” In literature is a short-written tribute in poetry or prose in memory of deceased person.  Strictly speaking, it refers to text that is inscribed on a tombstone or plaque, but it may also be used in a figurative sense.


    Application activity 3.2

    Read the poem below and then answer the questions that follow. 

    Someone special

    In your life you will meet SOMEONE SPECIAL sometime 

    Listen now as I tell you how death has took mine 

    Not a rock or a film star but a father so true 

    I lost SOMEONE SPECIAL when dad, 

    I lost you My heart it was aching when 

    I saw my mum Her crying, her shaking disbelief left me numb 

    I could not believe he was actually dead 

    Even after his name in the paper I read 

    At his funeral I carried his coffin with pride 

    Trying at all times my great hurt to hide 

    But my heart at last sank and the tears they did flow 

    But good memories stay with me where ever I go 

    His laughter, his smile, his quick cheeky wit 

    Were qualities that I admire, 

    I admit All children loved him with passion and fire 

    He showed love and kindness, which we all should admire 

    He left many people who cared a great deal 

    He touched their lives and their hearts he did steal 

    For to know him was pleasure and only brought joy 

    I was blessed to have loved him as both man and boy

                                                      By Owen Yeats

    Questions

    1. Identify the differences between elegy and epitaph. 

    2. Who is the persona/speaker in this poem? 

    3. Describe the tone used in the poem.


    3.3. Tone

    Activity 3.3

    Examine the picture below and identify specific characteristics of tone.

    Note:  The tone in the poem is the attitude you feel in it. The writer’s attitude towards the subject or audience helps create a particular kind of atmosphere or mood in the poem. 

    Application activity 3.3

    Read the poem below and answer the questions that follow.

    The Road Not Taken

    Two roads diverged in yellow wood 

    And sorry I could not travel both 

    And be one traveller, long 

    I stood And looked down one s far as 

    I could To where it bent in the undergrowth;

    Then took the other, as just as fair 

    And having perhaps the better claim 

    Because it was grassy and wanted wear 

    Though as for that the passing there 

    Had worn them really about the same

    And both that morning equally lay 

    In leaves no step had trodden black 

    Oh, I kept the first for another 

    Day! Yet knowing how ay leads on to way 

    I doubted if I should ever come back 

    I shall be telling this with a sigh 

    Somewhere ages and ages hence: 

    Two roads diverged in a wood, and 

    II took the less travelled by 

    And that has made all the difference.

                                  By Robert Frost

    Questions

    1. Identify and explain the tone of the poem. 

    2. Why does Robert Frost use the word “sigh” in the poem, The Road Not Taken? 

    3. What does the phrase “ages and ages” mean in the poem The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost? 

    4. In not more than 100 words, summarise the poem.

    3.4. Atmosphere

    Activity 3.4

    Read the poem below and answer the questions that follow.

    The lazy man 

    When the cock crows, 

    The lazy man smacks his lips and says: 

    So is it day light again, is it? 

    And before he turns over heavily, 

    Before he even stretches himself, 

    Before he even yawnsThe farmer has reached the farm, 

    The water carriers arrive at the river, 

    The spinners are spinning their cotton, 

    The weaver works on his cloth, 

    And the fire blazes in the blacksmith’s hut. 

    The lazy one knows where the soup is sweet 

    He gazes house to house. 

    If there is no sacrifice today, 

    His breast born will stick out! 

    But when he sees the free yarm, 

    He starts to unbutton his shirt, 

    He moves close to the celebrant. 

    Yet his troubles are not few. 

    When his wives reach puberty, 

    Rich men will help him to marry them. 

                                Yoruba (Nigeria) 


    Questions

    1. Analyse critically the poem above and explain its atmosphere. 

    2. What is the lesson can you learn from this poem? 

    3. With clear references from the poem, show that the man does not work for food.

    Note:  In literature, atmosphere refers to the feeling, emotion, or mood a poet conveys to a reader through the description of setting and objects. It aims at creating an emotional tone for the piece. A writer can establish atmosphere, or the vehicle for mood, through several different facets of a work. One such mechanism is through the use of objects.

    Application activity 3.4

    Read the following poem If we must die by Claude  McKay and answer the questions.

    If We Must Die 

    If we must die, let it not be like hogs 

    Hunted and penned in an inglorious spot 

    While round us bark the mad and hungry dogs 

    Making their mocks at our accused lot 

    If we must die, o let nobody dies 

    So that our precious blood may not be shed 

    In vain; then the monsters we defy 

    Shall be constrained to honour us though dead 

    O kinsmen! We must meet the common foe 

    Though far outnumbered let us show us brave 

    And for their thousand blows deal one deathblow 

    What though before us lays the open grave? 

    Like men we’ll face the murderous, cowardly pack 

    Pressed to the wall, dying, but fighting back


    Questions

    1. What was Claude McKay’s purpose of writing the poem If We Must Die? 

    2. What is the tone of the poem? 

    3. Who is the persona? How do you know? 

    4. Is the persona afraid of death? Support your answer. 

    5. Is the poem relevant today? Give reasons to justify your answer.

    3.5. Point of view

    Activity 3.5

    Read the excerpt from the poem My mistress‘s Eye is nothing like the sun and then answer the questions.

    I live to hear her speak, yet well 

    I know That music hath a far more pleasing sound 

    I grant I never saw a goddess go, 

    My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground. 

    And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare 

    As any she belied with false compare.

                         William Shakespeare

    Questions

    1. Identify and explain the point of view used in this poem. 

    2. When does the poet use this point of view?

    Note: The point of view of a story is defined as the perspective from which a story is told. Point of view is the angle of considering things, which shows us the opinion or feelings of the individuals involved in a situation. In literature, point of view is the mode of narration that an author employs to let the readers “hear” and “see” what takes place in a story, poem, or essay.

    The speaker of a poem is not identical to the poet. Often the poet creates a persona who speaks the poem in the first person (I, WE).

    A first-person narrative is a poem writing in which a narrator relays events from his or her own point of view using the first person i.e. “I” or “we”, etc. It may be narrated by a first person protagonist (or other focal character), first person re-teller, first person witness, or first person peripheral.


    Application activity 3.5

    Read this poem below and then answer the questions that follow.

    I Met a Thief

    On the beach, on the 

    Coast, Under the idle, whispering coconut towers, 

    Before the growling, foaming waves, 

    I met a thief, who guessed 

    I had An innocent heart for her to steal. 

    She took my hand and led me under 

    The intimate cashew boughs which shaded 

    The downy grass and peeping weeds. 

    She jumped and plucked the nuts for me to suck; 

    She sang and laughed and pressed close 

    I gazed: her hair was like the wool of a mountain sheep, 

    Her eyes, a pair of brown - black beans floating in milk. 

    Juicy and round as plantain shoots 

    Her legs, arms and neck, 

    And like wine - gourds her pillowy breasts; 

    Her throat uttered fresh banana juice  

    Matching her face - smooth and banana ripe 

    I touched - but long before 

    I even tasted My heart had flowed from me into her breast; 

    And then she went – High and South – 

    And left my carcase roasting in the fire she’d lit

                                              Austin Bukenya.


    Questions

    1. How appropriate is the title to the poem? 

    2. Comment on the setting of the poem. 

    3. Who is the persona in this poem? 

    4. Explain the use of imagery in the poem. 

    5. In your own words, explain what this poem is talking about.


    3.6. Poetic devices


    Poetic devices that can be used to create rhythm, including repetition, syllable variation, and rhyming. In poetry, repetition is repeating words, phrases, or lines.  Like Dalai Lama, poetry’s prime purpose in this life is to help others. And if you can’t help them, at least don’t hurt them. Mason Cooley instilled this statement by saying “Regret for wasted time is more wasted time”.      

    Poetic devices that can be used to create rhythm, including repetition, syllable variation, and rhyming. In poetry, repetition is repeating words, phrases, or lines.  Like Dalai Lama, poetry’s prime purpose in this life is to help others. And if you can’t help them, at least don’t hurt them. Mason Cooley instilled this statement by saying “Regret for wasted time is more wasted time”.    

    Some of the poetic devices are either used in prose others in poetry. It sometimes happen that one poetic device may appear in both genres. This is depends upon how it has been used. The poet has right to use a diction that fits his objectives. That is the reason why different poets write on different topics but one of them has forgotten motif and theme when writing. 


    3.6.1. Metonymy 


    Activity 3.6.1

    1. What do you understand by metonymy? 

    2. List any four examples of metonymy.

    Note:  Metonymy is a poetic device or figurative language in which a thing or concept is called not by its own name but rather by the name of something associated in the meaning with that thing or concept. It takes its root from Greek term metonymia which means “change of name.”


    Application activity 3.6.1

    Read the following poem “I Speak for the Bush” by Everett Standa and answer the questions.

    I Speak for the Bush..! 

    When my friend sees me he swells and pants like a frog because I talk the wisdom of the bush He says we from the bush  don’t understand civilized ways for we tell our women to keep the hem of their dresses below the knee we from the bush, my friend insists, do not know how to ‘enjoy’: when we come to the civilized city, like nuns we stay away from the nightclubs where women belong to no man and men belong to no women and these civilized people  quarrel and fight like hungry lions 

    But my friend, why do men with crippled legs, lifeless eyes, wooden legs, empty stomachs wander about the streets of the civilized world...? 

    Teach me, my friend, the trick, so that my eyes may not see those whose houses have no walls but emptiness all around; show me the wax you use  to seal your ear to stop hearing the cry of the hungry  

    Teach me the new wisdom which tells men to talk about money and not love when they meet women; 

    Tell your God to convert  me to the faith of the indifferent the faith of those who will never listen until they are shaken with blows 

     I speak for the bush: you speak for the civilized- will you hear me...? 

    Questions

    1. What is the subject matter of the poem? 

    2. Identify and explain metonymy found in the poem. 

    3. What is the poet’s message in the poem?

    End unit assessment activities

    Read the following poems and then answer the questions that follow.

    Building the Nation 

    Today I did my share 

    In building the nation. 

    I drove the permanent secretary 

    To an important urgent function


    In fact to a luncheon at the Vic.

    The menu reflected its importance 

    Cold Bell beer with small talk, 

    Then fried chicken with niceties 

    Wine to fill the hollowness of the laughs 

    Ice-ream to cover the stereotype jokes 

    Coffee to keep the PS awake on return journey.

    I drove the permanent secretary back. 

    He yawned many times in the back of the car 

    Then to keep awake, he suddenly asked, 

    Did you have any lunch friend? 

    I replied looking straight ahead 

    And secretly smiling at his belated concern 

    That I had not, but was sliming!

    Upon which he said with seriousness 

    That amused more than annoyed me, 

    Mwananchi, I too had none! 

    I attended to matters of state. 

    Highly delicate diplomatic duties you know, 

    And friend, it goes against my grain, 

    Causes me stomach ulcers and wind. 

    Ah, he continued, yawning again, 

    The pains we suffer in building the nation! 

    So the PS had ulcers too! 

    My ulcers I think are equally painful 

    Only they are caused by hunger, 

    No sumptuous lunches! So two nation builders 

    Arrived home this evening With terrible stomach pains 

    The result of building the nation –      

    Different ways.

                                           By Christopher H. M. Barlow (Uganda)

    Questions

    1. What is the poem talking about? 

    2. Who is speaking in the poem? How do you know? 

    3. What is the tone of the poem? 

    4. Identify some poetic devices used in the poem. 

    5. The poet says in the last stanza ‘so two nation builders arrived home this evening’ were the   

    6.  two people building the nation? Explain your answer.

    A freedom song

    Atieno washes dishes, 

    Atieno plucks the chicken, 

    Atieno gets up early, 

    Beds her sucks down in the kitchen, 

    Atieno eight years old Atienoyo.

    Since she’s my sister’s child 

    Atieno needs no pay 

    While she works my wife can sit 

    Sewing each sunny day, 

    With her earning I support 

    Atienoyo. Atieno’s sly and jealous 

    Bad example to the kids 

    Since she minds them, like a school girl 

    Wants their dresses, shoes and beads. 

    Atieno ten years old, Atienoyo.

    Now my wife has gone to study 

    Atieno’s less free, 

    Don’t I feed her, school my own ones, 

    Pay the party, union fee

    All for progress? 

    Aren’t you grateful, Atienoyo?

    Visitors need much attention, 

    Specially when I work nights. 

    That girl stays too long at market 

    Who will teach her what is right? 

    Atieno rising fourteen, Atienoyo.

    Atieno’s had a baby 

    So we know that she is bad 

    Fifty-fifty it may live 

    To repeat the life she had, 

    Ending in post partum bleeding Atienoyo


    Atieno’s soon replaced 

    Meat and sugar more than all 

    She ate in such a narrow life 

    Were lavished in her funeral 

    Atieno’s gone to glory Atienoyo. 

                   By Marjorie Oludhe Macgoye

    Questions

    1. What is the poem about? 

    2. What is the tone of the poem? 

    3. Who is the persona? How do you know? 

    4. How does Atieno change over the years? 

    5. What is the main theme of the poem?

    UNIT 2 : STRUCTURE IN MODERN PROSEUNIT 4 : LIMERICKS - RHYME AND RHYTHM